PLAN:
Ideas are organised into one cohesive paragraph with simple language. There are no unnecessary examples, details or personal information. Use only about 60 words.
EXAMPLE: Zoos - Then and now.
- Paragraph 1: Zoos first built for entertainment.
- Paragraph 2: Now zoos are changing. Save animals from extinction.
- Paragraph 3: Zoos now planned differently: take into account health and safety of animals and visitors. Educational role is now important.
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